Question:
New song our band wrote
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tell me what you think.
Decisions.
Sometimes I feel like my world
Is falling apart around me
Sometimes I want to run and hide
Where nobody can see me
What’s above is below
What’s ahead is behind
Will someone help me
Because I’m out of my mind
Chorus:
The things I want to do
And the things I know I should
Are pulling me in all directions
Should I listen to your voice
Or the whispers of my mind
You cannot serve two masters
You can only choose one road
Sometimes I feel like my life
Is finally making some sense
Sometimes I want to know
Where does all of this end
I’ve been looking ahead
Leaving my past behind
No more confusion
Because I’ve made up my mind
Chorus
Answer:
hmmmm i like it... it sounds like it should be really good. perhaps some sort of bridge though. idk lol.... hey maybe your band could give me some idea on where to start on a song for my "group"... my thread i originally had this in the lit forum... maybe im too critical of myself sometimes...