Question:
So this is a song I wrote with my band, the noblest
Going the Distance(To Find You Back at the Start)
not right now, I don't think I'm ready for it
shut your mouth, I swear that I'm good for it
don't you know that I'm the only one?
take your time, don't you dare ignore it
run away, you're back before you even know it
don't you know that you're the only one?
and I swear I'm not leaving here tonight empty handed
and I swear I'm not leaving here tonight without you by my side
hide away your heart before they catch you
that's how it goes, oh God how I'll miss you
I swear I'll write you every night
you never know, we're making our hearts grow fonder
we don't belong can't stay here any longer
you'll be gone and I'll miss you...
I made a vow...it's written on my heart...
with every letter of every word...I swear I'll make it up to you...
the recording is at http://www.myspace.com/thenoblest
so check it out!
Answer:
Right off the bat, It's good...
...But not as good as a lot of your stuff.
I'll try to return with a more full RC eventually.
Answer:
indeed...normally I have free reign in my lyrical prowess...this time I was confined to a guitar part that was written entirely and had to make lyrics fit...so not as poetic but definately as emotional
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I don't know much about songwriting, but I really like the song. I've been listening to it on the iPod. Very catchy.
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mmm, yay! I like to hear that...anyone else?