Question:
you put a gun to my head
you did just what they said
you would do
You left me for dead
and never again
am i going back to
this sin I once wed
Oh Lord tonight
help me get this right
and fight this fight
oh lord tonight..help me get this right...get this right..
About sin and the satan's betrayal that will happen.....
Answer:
Hi. This is a good start. Like you said its is still unfinished. Be sure to post up the next part you write.
Answer:
I fear that the chorus part is cliche....and thats exactly what I don't want. I kinda think I was just shooting for a chorus and did that kinda quick. I will think up something better, and post it when I get done. But for now, enjoy your night.
Josh
"Life isn't fair but neither is death."
Answer:
*intro plays*
*verse 1*
you put a gun to my head
you did just what they said
you would do
*verse 2*
You left me for dead
and never again
am i going back to
this sin I once wed
*music slows*
*chorus*
what am I doing here?
why am I doing this?
when the truth's so clear
why are there so many questions?
*bridge*
as I stumbled through the door
as I hit the floor
I don't want this anymore
Updated, soon to be renamed. Critique me, praise me, flame me. Whatever is fine.
Josh