Question:
Hey everyone! I already realize the title of this song is already used by another song but it merely a temporary title. This song tells of someone going through some rather troubled times...Please tell me what you think.
It's useless,
Look across the waves,
They're endless,
And there's no one left to save me
The sun's hidden,
And the water is all I see,
It's a given,
It gets harder and harder to breathe
And it sinks in as I'm sinkling down,
I'm drowning...I'm drowning!
(Chorus)
I won't go down this way,
Not after all you've paid for me,
And my arms they ache,
They wanna move to break free,
But I'm- So- Far-,
From where I began.
It's not completely finished yet but hopefully I'll finish and actually add music to it soon. Perhaps make a clip for you guys. =P Hope you like and God Bless! Later.
Ashley
Answer:
Pretty good so far. Better than mine.
Answer:
i really like it. esspecially the line "it sinks in as i'm sinking down."