Question:
Are We Going Down?
by Jacob Lord
I'm tired of all the days
Of sacrilegious ways
I deny their face
Look into my eyes
I think it's falling short
Keep an eye on whether
Here we can't live forever
You're just waiting until the time is right
I've never felt like this before
Are we going down?
Pick myself up off the floor
We aren’t gonna drown
I’ve never felt like this before
Are we going down?
I'm staring at the face
Of those falling out of the race
We can't deny them fate
Look into their eyes
I think they're falling short
Keep an eye on whether
Here we can't live forever
You're just waiting until the time is right
And the time, I feel, is almost near
We can't live forever here
And the time, I feel, is almost right
I've never felt like this before
As my heart hits the floor
I've never felt like this before
Like my life is going down
Answer:
you should probably change the first feel, to fear, and you should change gonna down to going down, and a few other things, but besides that it looks good.
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Looks pretty good, I like it
~Jen
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where does it say "gonna down"?
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Maybe she means "gonna drown"
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Are we going Down down?!
Sugar, we're going down swingin!!!

Answer:
Originally Posted by TahoeJeff Are we going Down down?!
Sugar, we're going down swingin!!!
Sadly, that got stuck in my head as soon as I read the title.
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dude, jacob would hate these comments cuz someone said the his song splattered on a piece of paper sound emeryish and he hates emery cuz they are the most emo band he's ever heard and he can not stand fall out boy and he totally hates sugar were going down... he's more of a mushroomhead/system of a down kinda guy lol
and also, if she meant where it said gonna drown, going drown wouldn't make any sense
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Originally Posted by TahoeJeff Are we going Down down?!
Sugar, we're going down swingin!!!
curses! that song is stuck in my head now.
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Hehe, I didn't get it stuck in my head.
Well, I think the song is really vauge. I honestly have no clue what you are talking about. It sounds like it could have a nice hook in the chorus, though.
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i'm not 100% sure but i think he said that song was about how the world is getting worse and worse henceforth they are going down