Question:
COLD
Daniel 9:10, 16-19; Ps. 80:18-19
V1- Another cold winter day,
Inside the church, hungry people stay.
Hungry for hearts of fire,
Longing for heavenly desire.
Chorus-Praying prayers that seem so bold,
Crying, “Father, our hearts are so cold!
Oh Lord, warm our cold hearts.”
V2- Let Your glory shine from Your face!
We’ll welcome it with sweet embrace.
Oh Lord, set our hearts on fire.
Give us heavenly desire.
Chorus
Solo
Chorus
“Oh Lord, warm our cold, cold hearts…”
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this is definately a song that needs work.I like the chorus as is,but I could use suggestions on the verses..thanks
Answer:
I like this, could turn into a very nice praise song
one thing.
Chorus-Praying prayers that seem so bold,
Crying, “Father, our hearts are so cold!
Oh Lord, warm our cold hearts.”
you could use another word instead of cold for the last night, because it seems like your repeating yourself. Either a change of words or just take the word out.
gj
Answer:
thanks for critiquing.
So what you're saying is just make the last line something like "Oh Lord,warm up our hearts" or something like that?