Question:
What a lousy first line this would be
and a lousy love song it would make,
but I love everything about you, baby,
all of you, neither give nor take...
Though everyone else has said it,
I still think everyone has lied,
but, baby, there ain't no containing
the way I feel for you inside...
I want to run from your mountains to your valley
and bathe with you in morning's dew,
I want to lay a fleece for both of us to lie on
and see what one more night could do.
We're gonna write this song together
about everything that we both are,
I'm gonna sing to you with all the passion
of a burned out shooting star...
And we'll drink this cup of lifeblood,
break this bread and bone,
raise our glasses to the fallen sun
and toast the coming dawn...
I want to build this house around you
and dwell in it with no one else,
I want to lay a stone for us in Zion
and let St. Peter's go to hell.
As I love you like no other
but the ransomed have been loved,
As we write this song together
with the Father, Son, and Dove...
... and then some more to be written.
I have a problem with innuendo. Ha.
Answer:
Lol yeah i caught the innuendo, at first I was like..whaaaaa??? then I got it.
Other than that i like it, no major changes that i can see.
GjGj!