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Another ****ing Love Song (RC)

Question:
I can't write another ****ing love song,
This pen has already used up all the lines,
I can't fill another ****ing notebook
With cheap cliches and throwaway rhymes...
But I can sing these songs,
And I can write these words,
In a way they'll never be found,
In a way they'll never be heard...
In the back of my mind there is a tune that turns
Every thought of you into another love song,
On the tip of my tongue there is a word that waits
And lingers as long as I live and I learn...
What it's like to love a woman
Deeper than you would love yourself,
What it's like to hold a woman
Stronger than you'd want to be held.
I won't tell you what you mean to me,
Words are worse than the silence they break,
I won't bother you with odes or vows,
Songs are shorter than the time they take...
But I will hide these hymns,
And I will seal these songs,
In a place they'll never be found,
In a place they'll never be heard...
In the depths of hell there is a place reserved
For everyone who ever sung of what they never knew,
In the depths of me I thought that I deserved
Nothing but the old, and the borrowed, and the blue...
I thought I'd never love a woman
Deeper than I could love myself,
I thought I'd never hold a woman
Stronger than I'd want to be held.
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Very rough cut... and needs a few more sections... but, there you have it.
Answer:
I like this....a lot. Is there music for it or is it just words?
Answer:
There are some great, I mean GREAT lines here. The verses are spectacular. That is exactly how I feel about love songs...this is definately the love song that puts every other love sing out of it's misery.
Answer:
Originally Posted by Lee Modlin I like this....a lot. Is there music for it or is it just words?
There are ideas... but, as usual, I really have no good way to record them right now.
Thanks for the kind words, both of you.
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You can use my laptop if the Edirol thing won't interact properly with Linux.
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I may do that one day when I have time to nail down final renditions of some of these tunes.
Answer:
hehehe...sing these songs...
i like the swearing.
patd
Answer:
Originally Posted by paat hehehe...sing these songs...
Hehe.
i like the swearing.
Haha.
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