Question:
So I was looking for a place to share my music....I've written a lot of tabs for this site and It's my homepage so lol yea....I figured it'd be a good place to see what people think.....This is just one of the 4 songs I havve written...2 more are on my myspace page which is www.myspace.com/mikelynammusic All my music is acoustic but darker than your average acoustic song. So tell me what you think if anyone actually visits this thread.
Verse1:
There's doubt in my soul
of everything and there is
fear of something going wrong
my flesh just wants to
hold on
to control (x3)
Chorus:
God let me know
that you, Oh, Lord are in control
God let me know
that you are here
you are here
Verse2:
I've known all along
that you are god
but I'm still hearing those lies
that all is going wrong
help me believe
it's not me (x3)
Chorus:
Answer:
Welcome to the Songwriting Forum!
Overall i really like this, i havnt gotten a chance to listen to the music yet since im babysitting right now, but just looking over it i like it alot.
I'll probably come back with some minor details but again good job dude!
Answer:
Thanks.....any feedback is appreciated