Question:
Here's my new song dont have a second verse yet but yeah here we go:
Verse 1:
He's a slick, hot driver
And one mean fighter
But he came to church every week
He sat on the third row
And smiled at his foes
When they started to squirm and squeak
He claps his hands
And sings his songs
Once I think he even shed a tear
He calls himself a Christian
The say hes a fool
But no one really seems to care
Pre - Chorus
Oh - Billy what are you gonna do
Don't you think it's time
Billy your a hypocrite
Don't you think it's time
Chorus:
Billy your as fake as Barbie
You can just stick a smile on
You can raise your hands
And bend your legs
And shout when the shoutin' comes on
Yu think your gettin' by
Oh - but if you only knew
Billy Your a hypocrite
And God always sees you
Thats it for now i will have the rest up later tonight
thanks RC
Kris
Answer:
Someone?
Answer:
Umm... it's creepy?
Answer:
You tend to switch in the verses from past to present tense, which can get a bit confusing.
Answer:
"And God always sees through" sounds a little better to me at the end of the chorus.