Question:
Hey, these is a brand new lyrics I wrote last night when I was so inspired and moved...Please tell my what u think. And what sorta of music I should add to it..or if? Thanks
"Closer To You"
Everpresent, everloving Lord,
You forgive me, You dont forget me,
You heal my deepest wounds.
I want to be yours.
I want to be transformed.
Keep me from falling away,
Keep me from going astray.
I want to draw closer to You,
So You can draw closer to me,
I want to speak the truth
So that I can truly see (You)
What I to lose?
When I've got Your everything to gain.
Your worthy of all glory.
I bow before Your name.
God, work in my life,
Cause I can't do it alone.
God, work in my life.
Even tho' i try to run.
I want to draw closer to You,
So You can draw closer to me.
You are so forgiving, so amazing
In my life, I want you to please.
I can't do it alone,
I need you to work in me.
Oh Lord I love you.
Thank you being so true.
Answer:
It's good. very similar to alot of worship songs, but it says the message well.
It's hard to crtique these kind of songs because mostly the authors in general aren't real concernced about being anything but straight forward in their lyrics, which is the way it should be done so that audience can jump right into the song and participate without trying to decipher deep, metophoric lyrics.
I'm assuming you were thinking a kind of contemporary popy sound, i think that is what the song screams for.
all in all a good solid song
Answer:
Thanks alot. Now Im gonna try to put music to it :/ Lol....this should be interesting.
Answer:
Oh, if you want you can "RC" that, I just found out what it was..lol.