Question:
New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please...
I Am Yours
It's amazing to me
That you would send your son to die
For a sinner such as I
It's amazing to me
That even with my sind and all my pride
You'd still want me for your bride
Cause I'm far from white
I'm far from pure
I'm far from spotless that's for sure
I've turned against
I've gone astray
But you still want me any
For you reach out your arms
And you hold out your hands
And you call out my name
I am yours
I am yours
I am your
Jesus I am yours
Music included...
Answer:
Originally Posted by luvinjesus New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please...
I Am Yours
It's amazing to me
That you would send your son to die
For a sinner such as I
It's amazing to me
That even with my sind and all my pride
You'd still want me for your bride
Cause I'm far from white
I'm far from pure
I'm far from spotless that's for sure
I've turned against
I've gone astray
But you still want me any
For you reach out your arms
And you hold out your hands
And you call out my name
I am yours
I am yours
I am your
Jesus I am yours
Music included... Is it really that bad, that no one comments on it?
Answer:
hold your horses.
Originally Posted by luvinjesus New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please...
I Am Yours
It's amazing to me
That you would send your son to die
For a sinner such as I
It's amazing to me
That even with my sind and all my pride
You'd still want me for your bride
Cause I'm far from white
I'm far from pure
I'm far from spotless that's for sure
I've turned against
I've gone astray
But you still want me any
For you reach out your arms
And you hold out your hands
And you call out my name
I am yours
I am yours
I am your
Jesus I am yours
Music included...
eh, it's a good praise and worship type song. I've never been good at critiqueing this type of song because I've heard this subject 312425423 times. literally.
Answer:
Music fits well with the lyrics. It could use a unique catch in the lyrics, but its pretty good overall.