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I Am Yours (RC)
Question: New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please... I Am Yours It's amazing to me That you would send your son to die For a sinner such as I It's amazing to me That even with my sind and all my pride You'd still want me for your bride Cause I'm far from white I'm far from pure I'm far from spotless that's for sure I've turned against I've gone astray But you still want me any For you reach out your arms And you hold out your hands And you call out my name I am yours I am yours I am your Jesus I am yours Music included... Answer: Originally Posted by luvinjesus New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please... I Am Yours It's amazing to me That you would send your son to die For a sinner such as I It's amazing to me That even with my sind and all my pride You'd still want me for your bride Cause I'm far from white I'm far from pure I'm far from spotless that's for sure I've turned against I've gone astray But you still want me any For you reach out your arms And you hold out your hands And you call out my name I am yours I am yours I am your Jesus I am yours Music included... Is it really that bad, that no one comments on it? Answer: hold your horses. Originally Posted by luvinjesus New song, I already know the recording sounds sucks, as does my voice and piano playing, just comment on the actual song please... I Am Yours It's amazing to me That you would send your son to die For a sinner such as I It's amazing to me That even with my sind and all my pride You'd still want me for your bride Cause I'm far from white I'm far from pure I'm far from spotless that's for sure I've turned against I've gone astray But you still want me any For you reach out your arms And you hold out your hands And you call out my name I am yours I am yours I am your Jesus I am yours Music included... eh, it's a good praise and worship type song. I've never been good at critiqueing this type of song because I've heard this subject 312425423 times. literally. Answer: Music fits well with the lyrics. It could use a unique catch in the lyrics, but its pretty good overall. Copyright © 2007 - 2008 www.thanktoday.com
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