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"If Superman was real, I would be his Kryptonite" (RC)

Question:
Ok so this is the start of my new song:
"If Superman was real, I would be his Kryptonite"
Verse 1:
On my knees again, on my face
"Where do we go from here?"
Held down by this iron ball of
Guilt and doubt and fear and shame
The list goes on
And onward bound I go
And homeward found I fall
I fall again and splash into my tears
The tears that drop in death
The death that dies in pain
The pain that goes away after 40 nights and days
Pre-Chorus:
Which way is up
Which way right
I don't know where to go
I lost my compass last night
Where do I go?
Where do I fall?
After I committed the same sin
And turned away from it all
Chorus:
"Where do we go from here?"
I'm stuck on the bottom
Which way is up?
"Where do we go from here?"
I'm stuck on the fast track
Stuck in the backtrack
Come on rewind lets go
ok so thats it for now, so tell me what you think....
thanks,
Answer:
Anyone?
Answer:
i dont know what type of music you'd like the song to be put to, but i imagine it as a metal song with some screamer parts and a hard voice the rest of the time. I really like the imagery you put in it. this song could rock hard dude!!!!
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