Question:
A song I wrote for a band I'm planning sometime to form (so please don't steal it...or else ) Tell me what you think...I could really use some comments on this one! (Might eventually record it, but kinda hard seeing that I'm on my own now and can't sing well enough)
[verse 1]
I heard the cries
Of a thousand broken hearts.
And saw the pain
And the torment go so far.
Crying for it
All to go
But it won't end.
And I know that
This one choice
Made it all begin.
[chorus]
Slowly dying piece by piece.
I get down
Onto my knees.
Saying sorry
For what our world did.
Trying to say
Goodbye to yesterday...
[verse 2]
I heard the screams
Of a nation's broken parts.
1973
And the war's still
Fought.
The "right"
We've got no right to claim.
Why do we play this game?
When we're...
Do the chorus again, then
[bridge]
How
Can the terror go untouched?
When
The pain has been so much...
Then the chorus, and some ending stuff...
(Edit: I just found out about what RCs were...feel free to give them!)
Answer:
BTW...I posted this before I figured out what "RC" stood for...This song is definitely RC.