Question:
Alright guys, so I was bored the other night and decided to write a song. I only have the second verse, chorus and bridge so far. Tell me what you think. (I've already written the music to it, as well.)
Verse 2:
So many tiems in life we see ourselves
As poor and retched beings
Unworthy of His undying love
A love we've turned our heads from
So we can no longer see
PreChorus:
And though you've turned away
Found yourself stuck so far down
In a rut so deep (so deep)
Hoplessness consumes you
And you stand alone and say
Chorus:
Where have you gone?
Why have you left me all alone?
I've searched for you, so many years
Your face I can no longer see
Where have you gone?
I'm here, I'm wanting you to hold me
Your loving arms around me
My God above
Where have you gone?
Bridge:
And when your world has faded far away
When the rail falls down upon your face
As you stand alone and say
Chorus
Where have you gone? x4
Answer:
sounds pretty good, and an overall nice theme to the song
btw tell me what u think of my latest one, that i put in this forum