Question:
Intro
There's red showing tonight
Black is searing through
Verse 1
I begged you to stay
I had answers for every excuse
But you shrugged them off you shoulders like raindrops unrequested
Such a diplomatic way to refuse
I had opened my heart
Made myself so vulnerable
But you're so unaproachably hard
And terrifyingly miserable
Chorus
The red in the sunset,
the blood you drained from my heart
The black night sky,
The void you ripped in me you ripped apart
Verse 2
Dark skies make for tired eyes
You won't open up to me
But I can see your colors now
Through dusguise of beauty
After death of heart comes
infection and disease
if not disected and cremated
till nothing of you remains
This song somes straight from personal experience, I just wrote down my feelings without thinking about anything else so I doubt that i'll change anything but i just wanted to see what you guys thought.
Answer:
I like it a lot. Good stuff man. Not much I can say about it, except I'd like to hear a recording.
Answer:
Wow. So descriptive! I really like it! ... can really feel the emotions.