Question:
It defiently needs work but here is what ive got so far:
V1 I turn my back on you, time and time again.
but each time you are waiting for me to,
realize my mistakes,you gaze upon me,
and never once does my sin effect your
love of me. i will never take for granted
Lord, your forgivness.
(Chorus)
Answer:
sounds like a nice beginning
Answer:
SECOND QUESTION:
whats a better chorus:
whats a better chorus so far?
Your forgivness oh Lord is infinite
a free gift for the taking,
lord we thank you
OR?
your forgivness oh lord
comes down like rain,
gently washing away
my sins. for this gift
we thank you
Answer:
i'd say the second one, although the idea of rain and washin away sins is overused it does sound better then the other one
Answer:
k ty dream ill keep working on it!