Question:
Wrote this over the course of the last couple days. It needs a third verse still, and possibly some lyrics to fill in the instrumentals I have for a bridge.
Second Chance
Call me a liar but the truth must be told
If you think you know better, leave me out in the cold
I'll whisper in your ear and you'll pretend that it's cute
I'll get tired of arguments that I can never refute
And we'll hope
And pretend
That the day will come when this is easier to defend
You can't cope
I can't sleep
I'm tired of making promises I can never keep
[chorus]
Your second chance is just another (3x)
Failure
Call me a cynic, we were doomed from the start
You know I'm reat and it tears your apart
There's a scene outside the window to beautiful for words
I close the blinds quickly as you mumble a curse
So we sit
And we stare
We've run out of ways to pretend there's something there
Won't admit
That we'll fall
We're not going to make it after all
[chorus]
Call me your loer and we'll try this again
Apologize for hours wondering where to begin
I'll smile pleasantly but it's just a facade
As we ponder whether sex will bring us closer to God
And we cry
'Cuz we know
One day we will have to reap every seed we sow
Can't deny
It's the end
But that doesn't mean that we won't pretend
[chorus]
Answer:
It's good. I really see everything going on throughout the song. It's great.
Answer:
Thanks mate. I've added a third verse now.