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To Escape From a Moving Car
Try and fall into my arms
Trust me on this one, please
I promise that I’ll catch you
Try to escape from a moving car
I’m gonna be right there waiting
I promise that I’ll catch you
There’s still blood on the asphalt
From the last time you had tried
But it could be washed away
With tears of joy today
We both know the pain of failing
This time I won’t let it happen
And the speed you’re going won’t matter
They think you’re going too fast
But I couldn’t live if I missed you
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I have music for this one. I like the music more than the lyrics. It has an indie-type feel in it.
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Flying First Class To Paradise
We’ve been here before
But only in our dreams
When our first class flight
Non-stop to paradise crashed
You said “expect the worst
So if it comes, you’ll be ready”
But did you ever imagine this?
Everything that scares you is here
There goes our ride
Meshing in with the beautiful stars
If those are even stars at all
Who cares right now, we need to get out
How do we go back
To when we held hands
Smiling?
When can we go back
To where we were
Smiling?
We could still be flying away
From the mess we left behind
We’d both be smiling
And I’d be hating
These selfish things I’ve loved
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I don't know if I have music for this one. I might, if it fits. It has a post-Clarity Jimmy Eat World/pop-punk feel if I use the music I'm thinking of.
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Welcome In the Morning
Dust off your lampshade
Wake up from your sleep
It’s been a while
And I’ve wanted to talk
Could you welcome in
The smell of Summer’s air?
It’s been so long
That I’ve forgotten
If we’ve even started
If I’m supposed to be here
Open your window shades
Let some light in here
It’s dark and damp
And I feel something on my leg
Could I have a drink?
Because I’d like to stay a while
I know it’s only a matter of time
Before I say something stupid
And you kick me out to cry yourself to sleep
Again
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I like this the most out of these three. When I have music, it'll have a Lovedrug/Radiohead feel to it.
**I don't like this title. At all. I couldn't think of anything else for it, though. Suggestions are more than welcome!
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Hey, could someone please tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it.
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I really like the first one. It's very sweet and meaningful Good job, Mattbert!
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Thank you Marabert!
What did you think of the others?
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The others were very good, too. That one just stuck out at me more. Of course, I'm also a little junior high girl who thinks everything is awesome My oppinion doesn't count for much
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Don't worry, Junior High Girls rock.
I guess this'll be dedicated to all of my songs. I hope to have something else up by the end of the week. We'll see how that goes...
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I love all three. All of them are very meaningful and deep. I like rhymes, I guess that's the only thing that's missing for me. But then again, I'm a big Mother Goose fan. Love that goose!
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Originally Posted by rock_guitar1990 I love all three. All of them are very meaningful and deep. I like rhymes, I guess that's the only thing that's missing for me. But then again, I'm a big Mother Goose fan. Love that goose! Yes, that's the biggest thing I need to work on. It makes a song flow so much more. I'm not good enough. Thanks for the kind words, Chris.
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Sure you're good enough. I think you rock. I can't write like you do, and I wish I could. Your songs seem a lot more meaningful than mine
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Thanks Mara!
What I was saying is I'm not good at rhyming lines in songs. It's something I'd like to work on a little more. And your songs are very good, don't worry.
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Find a way to fall in love with the moonlight
As you gaze at the stars in fascination
When will winter give up this year?
We've been waiting under this night ceaselessley
And let's not let winter
Last this long again
And don't you see the rediculousess of it all?
Just 3 hours ago this black sky was pure blue
The pale sun was shining on us from it's throne
Don't you see the beauty of it all?
And let's not let winter
Last this long again
We gave up too early before
And look how much we've failed
And I wish I never said those things
Don't you know how much regret hurts?
But you do know that if I take back those things
It will just make matters worse
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This is untitled for now. The music I have sounds a lot like The Verve Pipe's song "The Freshman".
Picture Perfect
I don't want to regret this
But it seems I already have
And that feeling of regret
Is the only change I've had
I want you to be happy
But I just can't live this way
Forever
I don't want this to be a mistake
But I want to love you
Forever
But I just can't live this way
Forever
I can't promise I'll reflect
The picture of me in your mind
So I'm sorry I'm not picture perfect
But could you love me anyway?
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Don't know if I'll keep this one...
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Originally Posted by Mattlock Find a way to fall in love with the moonlight
As you gaze at the stars in fascination
When will winter give up this year?
We've been waiting under this night ceaselessley
And let's not let winter
Last this long again
And don't you see the rediculousess of it all?
Just 3 hours ago this black sky was pure blue
The pale sun was shining on us from it's throne
Don't you see the beauty of it all?
And let's not let winter
Last this long again
We gave up too early before
And look how much we've failed
And I wish I never said those things
Don't you know how much regret hurts?
But you do know that if I take back those things
It will just make matters worse
Ooh, I like this one! Keep it up!
-Nick
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Originally Posted by Only Alive Ooh, I like this one! Keep it up!
-Nick Thanks Nick! Got any critiques on it? Reccomendations for a title?