Question:
To be with you
Seems like just 3 months ago I gave up my life
My life of hatred, of anger, and so much pain
But now found more to believe in
Then the shot of a drink
I've Found something worth giving up everything for
It's all changed now
Nothing seems the same
You came into my life
And showed me that
No matter the cost, you just want to be with me
I watched as my friends
Who didnt know the truth
Dragged themselves further down
I tried to save them but no words came out
What friend am I, if I dont show them the way
It's all changed now
I'm no longer the same
You gave me strength
To save those in so much pain
They now know that
No matter the cost, you just want to be with them
And now were all going to find more
To bring home to you
And we will all rejoice
That day when we see your face
It's all changed now
No ones longer the same
We all will believe
In your one way and truth
Because now, We just want to be with you
We just want to be with you...
Just to be with you
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that was really good
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yah my friends seem to think so, but most songs rhyme lol mine doesnt hehe, thats the only flaw i can find in it
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i've discovered that rhyming isn't the most important thing. it works in some songs
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ya i suppose it would depend on what kind of music i put to these words
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come on ppl i wanna get seriously critqued on this, more more more lol
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YOU WANT AN HONEST CRITIQING, ILL GIVE YOU HONESTY!!!
THEM WAS SOME KOOL LYRICS,THERE, I SAID IT, YA HAPPY NOW!!!!
oh, an the song dont have to ryme, it just has to make sense.
also, when you do put it to music, make it somethin that makes you move, dont worry about others, it only matters if you are truely excited by the sound, an feel of it.
i couldnt give a rats behind aobut a song if all the writer wanted to do was appease everybody, then its just dead. but i think if you actually put your heart into it, an find the sound you like others will be able to hear that in it to.