Question:
Verse 1
now i'll scream just one more time
just to paint another picture
of my humility

and i'll die just one more time
just to let you know again
i'm wrong, yea i'm wrong

prechorus 1
wrong about everything
my life and fake offerings
my words they fall without a meaning
theres to much to say to you
i never knew what i could do
to you

chorus1
how could i, be able to go on like i am
with you cast behind me below me
how could i, be able to carry your life

without you

verse 2
so i'll love just one more time
to show you
i really meant it

and i'll wonder why u did
everything for me
when i'm nothing at all for you

prechourus 2
because nothing stands in me
stands high enough for you
my God i will change
i will change just for you
i will change
..just for you

chorus x2

just something i threw together as i posted. tear it up guys
Answer:
Nice! I lwas surprised when you said you threw it together bcuz it sounds pretty good The meaning of the whole song is just great because I never hear it and it needs to be sung about (but then again I don't listen to enough music as I probably should) Definately worth working on, keep it up!
Answer:
Thanks man, i'll keep workin on it.
Answer:
I give it a Simon (from American Idol) review (ie: I'm being somewhat overly harsh on purpose):
After the first verse it just turns into another sappy, woe-is-me song that just complains about how hard it is to be a Christian. I'm still asking myself what your point is.
Answer:
I like...
It is kinda confusing who's perspective you're using in the pre-chorus and throughout the rest of it...
(practice tonight after church)