Question:
Rip it apart...
Verse 1:
I'm sober again
but my mind is still crippled by
the poison of your touch
I've come to a conclusion
about your intoxicating voice
and I've decided on one thing
Chorus:
I don't mind it at all
detached and aching
for your hands at my sides
I've been on this pill
it's called love or
something like a drug
I used to know
Verse 2:
I'm an odd piece in this
puzzle of Christianity
I’ll do better next time
for now, I’ll take my chances
I'll hold you closer to my chest
without morality to hold me back
Bridge/End:
Like a drug I used to know
you make me feel at home
Answer:
Originally Posted by Swanky Rip it apart...
OK. First I'll point out some good stuff:
Originally Posted by Swanky detached and aching
for your hands at my sides
I like this because the word "detatched" is operating on several different levels; "detatched and aching" describes a state of mind, but it's also talking about being physically and emotionally "detatched" from someone.
Originally Posted by Swanky without moral to hold me back
Shouldn't that be "morality"? It's clear what you mean, but it's a little jarring because "moral" means something different.
Answer:
Originally Posted by Blindman Shouldn't that be "morality"? It's clear what you mean, but it's a little jarring because "moral" means something different.
Ha... you're right, that's one of the biggest typos I think I've ever done.
Swank