Question:
Hey, this is my secong song I ever wrote. The first one is here
What do you think of this one?
"Falling"
verse 1:
I wish I could say
What you mean to me
I wish you would
Do the same
But I am to timid
To talk to you
Do you even
Know my name
chorus:
Ever since I met you
I have been falling (falling)
falling in love with you
Ever since I heard your name
I have been dreaming (dreaming)
Dreaming of me with you
Its not my fault
I fell in love with you
Cause you were the one
who tripped me
verse 2:

I am beginning
To love you more
Day by day by day
I even wonder
If you might
Love me the same way
I want you to love me
Like I love you
chorus:
Ever since I met you
I have been falling (falling)
falling in love with you
Ever since I heard your name
I have been dreaming (dreaming)
Dreaming of me with you
Its not my fault
I fell in love with you
Cause you were the one
who tripped me
verse 3:
Its a mystery
So dark and deep
Loving you (Loving you)
It's so hard to do
Since I don't know
If you love me too
chorus:
Ever since I met you
I have been falling (falling)
falling in love with you
Ever since I heard your name
I have been dreaming (dreaming)
Dreaming of me with you
Its not my fault
I fell in love with you
Cause you were the one
who tripped me
bridge:
Could it be
You love me too?
Could it be?
(Is it possible?)
I have been falling
(I have been falling)
I have been dreaming
(I have been dreaming)
Falling...
Answer:
hey its pretty good for pop music. i know who its about. hehe ill have to show the song i wrote about brittany sometime.
Answer:
Hey, this is my third song. Tell me what you think! (I just finished writing it)
Tell me what you think of my other songs too!!
Song #1
Song #2
"Higher Up"
Beginning:
Little girl
Living in
A broken world
Crying silently
And defiantly
Why are you the one
Who always has to get hurt
Why are you the one
Who is always treated like dirt
verse 1:
Coming from
A broken home
You are hurt
And so alone
You wish you were
A perfect girl
Coming from
A perfect world
pre-chorus:
But what you don't know is
chorus:
I am here for you
God is there with you
We both will hold you up
You can cry on me
And lean on Him
I will help you
lift your chin
Higher up
verse 2:
You are loved
From above
No other love
Can beat that
It's eternal
It is normal
It's not just a fad
pre-chorus:
Now you know that
chorus:
I am here for you
God is there with you
We both will hold you up
You can cry on me
And lean on Him
I will help you
lift your chin
Higher up
You can cry on me
And lean on Him
I will help you
lift your chin
Higher up
Higher up...
Higher up...
Higher up...
Answer:
BTW... this is (RC) I keep forgeting to put it in the title!!!
Answer:
Please... do not post more than one thread in this forum per day.. it helps a lot if you put all of your songs from one day in one thread. Thank you.
Merged.
Answer:
The songs keep coming..... here's #4. This is just a song about probably enjoying life (in the form of dancing).
"Dance to The Rythm"
verse 1:
Take it fast
Take it slow
Take it anywhere
You go
Move your feet
To the beat
Yeah by now
You outta know
pre-chorus:
How to
Chorus:
Dance to the rythm
Sing with the song
Life is a party
And it only lasts so long
verse 2:
You can laugh
You can cry
You can make it
To the sky
Loose your breath
Take a rest
Yeah let
Everybody try
pre-chorus:
to
chorus:

Dance to the rythm
Sing with the song
Life is a party
And it only lasts so long
bridge:
Don't stop dancin'
(Come on
Dance a little more)
Don't stop dancin'
(Come on
Dance 'till the music's o'er)
(Repeat 2x)
chorus:
Dance to the rythm
Sing with the song
Life is a party
And it only lasts so long
ending:
Dance to the rythm
(Don't stop dancin')
Answer:
With this one (#5) you need to know the rythm of the chorus for it to really flow.
"Offering of Praise"
verse 1:
Son of God
Yet Son of man
Sent to fullfill
God's sovreign plan
Meekly you came
Humbly you stood
To take my sins
On a cross of wood
chorus:
And I praise you Lord
today
In the most
Grateful way
To you
I give my praise
To you
I bow my face
Accept Lord this offering
Of praise
verse 2:
How is it
Such a rightous Son
Would love to take
The sins I've done
Take them for me
To calvary's tree
And go through
All my suffering
chorus:
So I praise you Lord
today
In the most
Grateful way
To you
I give my praise
To you
I bow my face
Accept Lord this offering
Of praise
bridge:
Praise be to God
The Alpha and Omega
Praise be to God
Our wonderful savior
(Repeat 1x)
chorus:
So I praise you Lord
today
In the most
Grateful way
To you
I give my praise
To you
I bow my face
Please accept Lord
Accept dear Lord
Accept Lord
this offering...
Of praise