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Question:
Just something I wrote one day.
Trapped
I知 trapped in this world痴 crazy Merry-go-Round
I want to get out, I want to get found
I知 dizzy, I知 tired, I知 coming around
I知 busy, I知 wired, I知 coming unwound
I知 stuck on life痴 wacky Ferris-Wheel
I want the power, I want the will
I知 ready, I知 waiting, I知 getting a steal
I知 steady, I知 debating, I知 getting a deal
I知 slowly sliding down life痴 slippery slide
I want to trust, I want to confide
I知 trying, I知 sick, I知 losing my pride
I知 flying, I知 quick, I知 losing my stride
I知 trapped and I can稚 get out
I知 experiencing what life痴 about
I知 stuck and I can稚 let go
I知 trying to go with the flow
I知 slowly sliding down
I知 starting to lose my frown
I知 trapped and I can稚 find the way
I知 waiting patiently for the new day
This is not my best but just wanted to start off with this one anyway.
Answer:
Here is a better one.
Verse
Todays your day
What'ya gonna do
Forget yesterday
Todays brand new
Theres no going back
Theres no getting out
Theres no giving in
Theres no turning around
Chorus
Todays your day
Nows your time
What'ya gonna do
Are ya gonna make it right
Forget yesterday
Its in the past
Todays a new day
How long will you last
Verse
Todays another day
Can we see what you've got
Tomorrow's a day away
But todays got you caught
Theres no going back
Theres no getting out
Theres no giving in
Theres no turning around
Chorus
Todays your day
Nows your time
What'ya gonna do
Are ya gonna even try
Forget yesterday
Its in the past
Todays a relay
Can you run fast
Bridge
Your stuck with what you've got
You've gotta work with what you've got
You've gotta live with what you've got
You've gotta give it all you got
Out Chorus
Todays your day
Nows your time
What'ya gonna do
Are ya gonna live or die
Forget yesterday
Its in the past
Todays your day
Will you live, will you last
I've written music for it too.
I know it looks long but the song,
even with a small gtr solo is only 4 and 1/2 minutes!
But please RC away folks.
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