Question:
Why
Intro
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My God My God
Why have you forsaken me?
Why do you ignore my cries
Chorus
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I cry out
but you don't answer me
Every time you hear my voice
But I find no relief
Verse 1
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Why do you ignore my cries
Why have you forsaken me?
Why are you so far from saving me
Verse 2
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they trusted you
and you rescued them
You heard their cries for help
and you answered them
why do you ignore my cries
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Answer:
Very general and doesnt seem to flow well. we dont know who "they" are and the second verse is longer than the first... It's fine besides the fact it doesnt flow well and it is general. Keep working! You could make this into something great! Later.
Answer:
Yeah! What he said^ I gave you a seven... just because it doesn't *seem* finished... the ending doesn't seem like the end, etc..keep working at it! I KNOW it could be something awesome.