Question:
Here's another. if you aren't keeping up...here's another. like most of mine...rock ...this one in style of i think reliant k .
VS-1
Here I am searching
Here I am needing
Here I am Wanting
Here I am begging for more of You ( repeat )
This is the last place i thought i'd be...
Chorus
But now im needing You
Now I'm following You
Now I'm searching for truth
Now I'm begging for You
Vs-2
This world is full of lies
not worthy thru your eyes
How did we end up like this , agin searching for truth
I think we got caught up, got lost in this race
But now this is where i stand
Chorus
Bridge - slow
I was feeling alone, I was falling away
I was wandering, I was lost
Get me on my feet again , get me on my feet again
get me on my feet again...Chorus
OK, since i am currently using this song under copyright i can give you some music...intro is ... Eb/B - Cb/G - 2 x's - Eb/B - Db/A then same thing while singing verse except it is chopped more like a two beat, CHorus is - G F Db/A Cb/G then again with slide after ' begging for you" Bridge is Bb C Bb
Enjoy. so how does it fare with you? We perform this one in my church band and it goes real well, especillay at the fairs.
Answer:
It's kind of an unwritten rule here, but I think it's a good one: please try to comment and critique on someone else's song for every one you post. It helps the forum when everyone's helping each other out, y'know?
As for this song...well, I don't see a single line that isn't a cliché. That's not a good thing. I don't mean to be harsh, but clichés are the antithesis of originality. You're a unique human being, created by God! Be unique!