Question:
Memory (No Wonder I Want You)
-verse 1-
Some people paint pictures
While I write mine down
A picture to remind me
Let me remind myself
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The smile you said was looking at me
Is burned into my memory
No wonder I want you
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I think, I think maybe I’ve fallen
And I can’t just let that be
Even though you mean so much
You know it’s hurting me
-verse 2-
Don’t say that it’s your fault
Because it won’t ever be
As much as I want it this way
It’s keeping me from what I need
But as always
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-interlude-
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I think, I think maybe I love you
And I wish I could let it go
I want it to stay like this
But I need you to know
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-tag-
Do you know how much I want you?
No wonder I want you
Answer:
I like it a lot. Good job!
Answer:
Thanks! Does anyone have any *real* critiques?