Question:
It's a worship song, in the style of something you could play at church perhaps. I wrote it all this morning in just a few minutes, after not sleeping all night, but it all came to me easily (which doesn't usually happen). What do you all think of it?
I thought that You had the strength to move mountains
But still You were stronger
I thought You'd give me a lifetime to adore you
You still gave me longer
And I thought Your love was as great as the Earth
Still Your love was greater
And I thought I knew
Just how faithful and true
And how glorious You are, but no
Jesus, I am convinced that You love me more than I ever could know
I thought my cross would forever pursue me
But Lord, You relieved me
And I thought my guilt would forever consume me
But Lord, You redeemed me
And I thought Your love was as great as the Earth
Still Your love was greater
And I thought I knew
Just how faithful and true
And how glorious You are, but no
Jesus, I am convinced that You love me more than I ever could know
Jesus, I am convinced that You love me more than I ever could know
Answer:
Wow. I really like it, and that says a lot 'cause I'm not usually a big fan of songs written in the modern worship style.
In His love,
Nate
Answer:
Holy cracker, that's good. Excellently done.
Answer:
I'm not a big fan of a lot of modern P & W music either, but I really liked your song. Great job man!
Answer:
Thanks guys! Do you think it would be better to word it "still you were stronger" like it is, or "you were still stronger?"
Answer:
Originally Posted by dream of angels Do you think it would be better to word it "still you were stronger" like it is, or "you were still stronger?"
I like it how it is now.
In His love,
Nate
Answer:
darn, that's good. I wish I could write worship songs. Great job!!!