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Seconds Too Long RC

Question:
this song is about how everyone is looking for something worth living for but alot of people have gotton tired of looking and just given up and just live for nothing.
Verse
Someone please rid me
of this misdirection
it does not fill, it only kills
another minute here is seconds too long
Chorus
Where's my direction in this world?
We just want something real
(We stuff ourselves but still we're emtpy
We keep trying but everything keeps failing)
We've got nothing left to show
Who will save us now
(we stuff ourselves but still we're empty
We keep trying but everything keeps failing)
Verse
it's apathy i see
on the tv news
no one cares theres more out there
than living here and now
we go, go wrong
accepting this as fate
lets shake it, lets break it
it's all we know
Bridge
We all live, i want something more
we all live, i want something to die for
Answer:
Hey man, I like it. Especially the verses and bridge. Can't think of any real critiques for you. Good stuff dude!
Answer:
I've made some changes in it because it was awkward to sing.
Answer:
Heh you do cover songs from 12 stones eh? Paul, the singer, goes to my church and the rest of the band are in neighborhoods 5 minutes from my house. Unfortunately their lifestyles don'treflect their music. They all drink and get high now that they have "made it big". Paul wrote those songs when he was a hard core christian but he slipped away just as a lot of teens do today and there band has declared they are secular now, so they are no better than any other band out there looking for the spot light and money. Just thought I would clue you in on the disapointment in case you didn't know.
Peace,
Matthew
Answer:
ok, well after seeing them live i hate them now, and that doesn't surprise me much, but i'm not sure why this is in my song thread lol
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