Question:
Me at the window
Snow in the shadows
In real life fading away
Sitting here waiting for day
Transistor radio
Hums out a carol
Paper like leaves on the floor
Cutting like thorns on a rose
Standing alone like a lightpost
Wandering unseen like a misguided ghost
This ache like the bite of the wind
Wondering if I can ever begin again
Night is a raven
Tolls like the bellman
Calling out still, 'never more'
I'm crawling up onto the shore
Nobody's talking
Nobody's calling
Reminds me that I'm still alone
It drones like a dry dial tone
Yeah...this one's still drying. Anyways, any suggestions for it? Even if you say something as simple as "I like" or "I don't like," it'll be good for me to let me know if I'm going in the right direction. In fact, if you like or don't like...please do say so. I need it. (:
Answer:
I think it pretty good. what kind of music is it (e.g. Rap, contemporary, etc.)?
Answer:
Music's probably gonna be something...I dunno, I guess I'd classify it as alternative rock. Not Mars Volta weird, but no generic brand music either. I had a 6/8 meter in mind when I wrote it (as if that helped any). And James Clay rocks (: