Question:
My eyes are tired-Chorus
They want an Hour or two
But it's cuz you're beautiful
I want more of you
I'll fight my pain, I'll fight my sleep-Verse 1
Just to be with you forever
You took me in
You wiped away my sin
I forgot my pain,forgot my sleep-Verse2
My eyes are bright, I feel your grace
I see it everywhere, my heart starts to race
My mind is filled with thoughts of you
Someone would have to drag me away-Verse 3
from this beautiful sight
I would kick and fight
for the One I love so much
Answer:
Can someone please critique my song because this is one of my songs I'm not sure whether to put in my upcoming Concert or not.