Question:
I see him sitting quietly
As I walk by
I see the look in his eyes
He's crying to be seen
And he's dying inside
And he goes through life
Wondering if he'll ever be
More than skin deep
And he goes through life
Wondering if he'll ever be
More than what you see
I see her standing there
As I walk on by
She drawing attention to herself
She just wants to be loved
And she's dying inside
And she goes through life
Wondering if she'll ever be
More than skin deep
And she goes through life
Wondering if she'll ever be
More than what you see
I sit here quietly
As the crowds walk on by
They don't see me
And I'm wondering why
I even care
Why do I care what they think
And I'm going through life
Wondering if I'll ever be
More than skin deep
And I'm going through life
Wondering if I'll ever be
More than what you see
Can we go through life
Knowing that He can make us
More than skin deep
Can we go through life knowing that with him
We will be
More than what they see
Do they see You
When they see me?
More than skin deep
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOD JOB!!!! thats so weird I have felt like that before, but not known how to express it, good job
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Thank you so much. I wrote it yesterday after comming home from being downtown for a while. I saw so many hurting people and I'm thankful God gave me a song for them!!!
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ah, that is cooool!
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nicly done.
I dont know how it would work as a song (or if it was meant to be a song), just because I cant think of a song-like rythem for it at all, but as poetry its amazing.
Im suprised more people didnt comment on this.
Very well done.
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Thank you!!!! It does sound kinda awkward when read and I can see how you may not be able to see it as a song. I'm going to try to record it this weekend. When I do, I'll post it.
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I finally recorded the song!! It's a really crappy recording cause I was forced to use the computers sound recorder I only recorded the first two verses and choruses because it's too long but hopefully you'll get the idea