Question:
This is one of my old ones... I can't remember if I've posted this here before, but oh well.. let me know what you think! It's the first song I ever wrote, so any changes or anything that any of you might suggest would be great...

Would You show him that You’re the one he needs?
Would You show him it’ll be alright
Would You show her there’s a beauty in her eyes?
Would You show her it’ll be alright?
Would You show them that when the times are tough
Even though the road is rough
That Your arms are open wide enough
He’s been yelling, shouting
Waiting for an answer
You’ve been softly saying
“I’ve been here all along.”
She’s been crying, sobbing
To be the fairest of them all
You’ve been gently weeping
Wishing she wouldn’t change at all
They’re cryin’
“Where are You, God?
Listen to my prayer
Please help me now
Show me that You care
Would You give me a peace that will make me feel alright?
Would You, would You, oh would You?

So You showed him that addiction can be cured
And You showed him that his prayers were heard
So You told her of her beauty countless times
And You showed her that the mirror told a lie
So You showed them their worth beyond compare
And that through the wear and tear
That You’ll always be there

They’ve been singing, dancing
Declaring Your praise
And You’ve been laughing joyfully
Your children have come home
They’re singing
“I’ve found You, God
You listened to my prayer
Please, help me now
Give the love You shared
So You gave me a peace that made me feel alright
Would You show me how to give a peace the world has never known
Would You, would You, oh would You?
Thank you, thank you, my Jesus
Answer:
I like it a lot. I like how you write, it's... I don't know, it's just cool
Answer:
I write about people a lot... I'm more into story songs, I listen to a lot of Nichole Nordeman and Mark Schultz.
Answer:
Very cool. I write story songs, too. I'm not really sure how I write, like what style or anything. I try to write rock, but girls don't tend to be too terribly good at writing rock songs I try though