Question:
ok this is just the first verse and pre chorus, but im workin on a chorus and that im hopin will b done by the end of the week, but what do u guys think
verse 1
I'm sick of all the whining
Sick of all the complaining
Whatever happned,
To all of our praising
Why's it gotten harder
To stand up and worship
To sing to our God
Who keeps us in amazement
Pre-chorus
When will we finally see
The reason were created...
Is to stand up and sing
Answer:
Originally Posted by dReAmIn4EvEr ok this is just the first verse and pre chorus, but im workin on a chorus and that im hopin will b done by the end of the week, but what do u guys think.
Here we go..
verse 1
I'm sick of all the whining
Sick of all the complaining
Whatever happned,
To all of our praising I think this has a good start. I would say that the lines are somewhat cliche. They aren't very original. Do you own a thesaraus? If you don't, you can go here and type in the word 'whining' or 'complaining'.. and come up with more obscure words. Look for words that people wouldn't normally use. It's fun!
Why's it gotten harder
To stand up and worship
To sing to our God
Who keeps us in amazement
This is pretty good... I like the fact that the last words of each line don't end with 'ing'..
Pre-chorus
When will we finally see
The reason were created...
Is to stand up and sing
This isn't so grand. Try to come up with a different way to say this..
How about: "When will we finally fathom?"
"The reason for our vigor"
" It's to stand up and sing"
I dunno.. Just throwing out some ideas!
Blessings,
Swank
Answer:
awsome song! All mine, are from the Bible, so there mainly worship songs, I am trying to make up a Christian Rock song, because later (in a few years) I am wanting to start a band, and its going to be Christian Rock, and a little Worship,
Answer:
haha ya i kinda thought some of the words/lines were cliche'd but ya im not that creative on the spurt of the moment ideas
and ya im hopin to start things up with my churches praise band im in, mainly worship songs right now but i wanna do a mix of christian rock and worship also...thanks alot
New verse 1 and pre-chorus
I'm sick of all the denouncing
Sick of all the ungracious
What ever happend
To all of our praising
When will we finally perceive
That the reason for our vigor(i like that word )
Is to stand up and sing