Question:
I kind of wrote this down last night and this morning.
Could you clarify my thoughts tonight
'cause I don't want to lose
the God I have used.
And I'm terrified I still don't know you.
My heart's had its day
still ripe, though it's torn in two.
My captive and my king
it's all the same you see
I blur lines once made distinct
between you and me (4x)
Maybe I shall record it.
Josh.
Answer:
Sounds good so far! BTW, can you crituque my songs please?