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She hides it all
behind her beautiful smile
almost convincing
the most perceptive of us all
and we're just waiting
for you to say something
and we'll be there when the story ends...
And his big eyes
are for more than just seeing
and his mouth
can devour you soul
and we're just waiting
for you to say something
and we'll be here when the fairytale ends...
And I'm just a lumberjack
with really keen ears
I've heard rumors of a wolf
so my axe is my hands!
I'm ready to cut you from the jaws
Just give me the go ahead!
I need to test my blade anyways
there's no better chance!
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Originally Posted by Nate
Ditto
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I actually really like this. It makes me smile, but at the same time, it makes me shudder. "Just give me the go ahead" isn't a great line and I think you could improve on it, but I'm okay with the rest of this song.
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Mostly, I'm confused as to why the title is about Goldilocks but the song is about Little Red Riding Hood.
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Originally Posted by Nate Mostly, I'm confused as to why the title is about Goldilocks but the song is about Little Red Riding Hood. Yeah, that's confusing me as well.
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Maybe that's what's confusing everyone.
Intense song. I like the metaphor.
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I like lumberjacks.
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The title is meant to confuse... As all the titles of my songs are... They're supposed to be loosely related but completely misleading at the same time... I once wrote a song called 'I Love you More than I Love Mel Brooks Movies' and it was about how I'd rather watch crappy movies while being tortured than date this girl...
Oh yeah...
This song is from the perspective of a loving family who has to watch while their loved one is in an abusive relationship and can't do anything about it because they wont say anything...
If you remember my other song, it's about the same guy... only this is my feelings in retrospect...