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Why did the chicken cross the road?
Because I'm a big fat loser!
Why did my girlfriend dump me?
To get to the other side!
A priest and a rabbi walk in a bar
I totaled my first car
Driving behind that slow poke
the bar tender said, Is this some sort of joke?
There's something wrong with my brain
I'm going slightly insane
this ryhme scheme is mundane
oh yeah! I'm masking my humor with pain!
What do you get when you cross an elephant and a rhino?
My dad is a wino!
He got fired from his last 6 jobs?
What happens when the rent is late? Helliphino!
There's something wrong with my brain
this stanza's so inane
this song is super mundane
oh yeah! I'm substituting humor with pain!
And you're gonna give me a slap
when you find out I'm full of crap
I have to make up sad stories
to sell my cd's cause my life is boring...
There's something wrong with my brain
I'm going slightly insane
this ryhme scheme is mundane
oh yeah! I'm masking my humor with pain!
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I think I'm gonna change the name to "knock knock it's the IRS" because it doesn't have anything to do with chickens...
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Yeah, I think that would be a better name for the song.
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That's a really good song. It's kinda pointless, just like everything else.
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Originally Posted by Napoleon17 That's a really good song. It's kinda pointless, just like everything else.
If you say it's pointless then you missed the point... but thanks...
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Brilliant, almost as good as Big & Tasty.
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Originally Posted by AXguitar If you say it's pointless then you missed the point... but thanks...
No I think I get it but it still seems kinda pointless.
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Originally Posted by +SEAL+ Brilliant, almost as good as Big & Tasty.
Originally Posted by Napoleon17 No I think I get it but it still seems kinda pointless.
Actually, to the both of you, this is a fairly serious song... well... maybe not fairly serious, but it's definitely not supposed to be humorous.
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I hate to break it to you, but it is humourous. I understand what you're going for in this song and you do a decent job with it, but there is still a fair amount of humour in it.
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Originally Posted by Skeeter I hate to break it to you, but it is humourous. I understand what you're going for in this song and you do a decent job with it, but there is still a fair amount of humour in it.
Well... It's meant to be humorous, but the humor only adds to the depth... I guess what I mean to say is, the humor is not the point or the focus of the song... It just makes my point a little stronger and I don't have to make it in a cliché manner.
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I like it. Understand it. And truely like it.
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Well... we're having trouble writing music for it... it's definitely not easy to do... the latest revision is almost like a 50's Chuck Berry styling with a hardcore breakdown (sounds weird but cool)...
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Well, this is going on the back burners for now... I just can't write music for it...