Question:
I have the tune and way to sing it all out, if I can get a mic i'll record a bit of it so you can get an idea of how the song goes.
The bridge i think needs a bit of work...
Hope you like it.
Everything to me
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Verse 1:
don't ever leave me
don't ever let me go
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
Verse 2:
don't ever let me leave your light
don't ever let me fade from you
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
Chorus:
(cause) you're all I ever need
you're all I ever want
you're everything to me
you're everything to me
Bridge:
i never knew what love was
until i met you
Answer:
It's like...a simple love song!
cool!
Answer:
I've changed some stuff in the chorus and altered the bridge...
Everything
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Verse 1:
don't ever leave me
don't ever let me go
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
Verse 2:
don't ever let me leave your light
don't ever let me fade from you
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
Chorus:
(cause) you're everything I need
you're everything I want
you're my everything
you're my everything
Bridge:
you're everything to me
you're everything to me Father
Answer:
Everything to me
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Verse 1:
don't ever leave me
don't ever let me go
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
ok.... so i like it a lil b/c its simple. but that's where my pleasure with the song stops... the first verse doesnt even rhyme!?!! and i understand the theme... which is "dont let me go." but can you say it in a more creative way?
Originally Posted by jalapeno Verse 2:
don't ever let me leave your light
don't ever let me fade from you
(so) hold me close
hold me tight
all i hear here is yadda-yadda-yah... same thing as the first verse. i would get rid of the first verse and just keep this... sry i sound so harsh...
Originally Posted by jalapeno Chorus:
(cause) you're all I ever need
you're all I ever want
you're everything to me
you're everything to me Father
Bridge:
i never knew what love was
until i met you
I seriously think that the bridge is the best part of the song, even though it is very cliché... sry, i just dont see what separates this song from nething else that neone else can write... just mediocre.. sorry but i think you can do better. keep trying!!! i will say no more... mama always said if you cant say nething nice, dont saying at all...