Question:
Revolution (Temp Title)
Verse 1:
I remember joy
A feeling i lost
After years and years of
watching the world go by
Chorus:
Let's go back (let's go back)
Let's start all over (start over)
System Crash, Reboot

System Crash, Reboot

Verse 2:
Couldn't face tomorrow
If i knew it was another today
Need to end this
Need to start all over
System Crash, Reboot
(Chorus)
Bridge
Hold my hand, as we go back
as we start over again
(Chorus)
Verse 3:
The friendly chime
Welcomes me back to
Another old house
on Another old street
Outro:
Let's go back! Let's go back!
System Crash, Reboot
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I really like this one, i think it's promising... i sorta have a feel of what it's going to sound like too.
Answer:
i once went over a speed BUMB, and broke off a piece of my bumper
Answer:
Hmm...this is interesting. Lyrically the bridge is a little cliche, but everything else looks good. I don't really see what direction this song is going musically though, so a recording would help a lot. Good stuff.
Answer:
Hmm...this is interesting. Lyrically the bridge is a little cliche, but everything else looks good. I don't really see what direction this song is going musically though, so a recording would help a lot. Good stuff. Yeah, i'm changing the bridge... maybe, i'm not sure yet
I will try to record it by this week or next. The chorus reminds me of "Hey Jude", i dunno if that's a good thing or bad thing yet, lol.