Question:
I see spaces in my heart
where I know only You should be
But I know there's more
I find myself in a place
where there's nothing but You and me
And I know there's more
I can't go on living like this
I don't want to be so broken
I want to sing to You
I need to worship You
but I'm so broken
And this broken masterpiece is all I know
I lock my heart too tightly
when it should be opened up wide
I want so much more
I close my ears to Your truth
when I want to live my own way
But I know it hurts
I can't go on living like this
I don't want to be so broken
I want to sing to You
I need to worship You
but I'm so broken
And this broken masterpiece is all I know
*I still have yet to come up with a bridge, and it's still a work in progress
Answer:
Haha, the name definately caught my attention. That's my band's name.
I think it's a good song, but it could use a little work. Try avoiding cliches, and use more imagery. It's a great start, though.